• Skip to primary navigation
  • Skip to main content
  • Skip to primary sidebar

Flash Fiction Magazine

Daily Flash Fiction Stories

  • Submissions
  • Subscribe
  • Live Events
  • Authors Only Collective
  • Contest
  • Featured Stories
  • Books
  • Masthead
  • Volunteer
  • Contact

The Gallery Attendant

October 13, 2015 9 Comments

By Keely O'Shaughnessy

Sometimes, I visit my wife’s gallery showing just to listen to her pre-recorded mission statement; the raspy quality of her voice played through the loudspeaker reminds me of the way she use to sound after late nights spent together drinking under the stars, our clothes smelling of bonfire.

Since my last visit a screen has been erected: a square of curtain, where the steward can sit in a makeshift room.

“Hello, in there?” I say, jiggling the curtain. After a moment, Kristy emerges.

“You’re wet,” she says, looking at me. I’d seen her here before and she’d seen me, and if I had to guess, I’d say she was somewhere around nineteen. I gesture down to the puddle of water pooled around my feet.

“So it would seem,” I say.

She’s confused by my reply so I smile and realise, parting my lips, that I haven’t brushed my teeth today. Maybe she thinks I was mocking her. Running my tongue along my gum-line, I mutter something about frames.

“I’m sorry?” she asks.

“The public are reassured when there’s a frame.”

Kristy frowns. “Only our small pieces have frames,” she says

“What I meant is, it shows it’s finished,” I say. “That the artist really means it.” The words feel loaded in my unwashed mouth.

“Oh—yeah,” she says.

“Although, that could still be a lie.”

I gaze at one of the paintings. The grass in the foreground has been carved out with a palette knife. Then, I shift my attention back to Kristy. The rise and fall of her chest. The white v-neck she’s wearing reveals jam-coloured birthmark above her left breast.

“Are you okay? I have a towel back there if you want to dry off,” she asks. “I got soaked this morning.”

Behind the curtain, there is more space than I’d imagined. Kristy goes to a set of storage boxes to retrieve a towel. Her boobs are smaller than Sarah’s, but firmer, the kind of boobs that keep their shape without a bra.

“I’ve seen you in here before?” she asks.

“I find it a good place to relax.”

“You like art then?”

“In a way,” I say. She must sense the hesitancy in my voice because she doesn’t probe further.

The space we’re in reminds me of Updike’s storage room in New York Girl; there’s even a tippy stall in the corner. Licks of Love was an anniversary present from Sarah. The narrator has an affair with a gallery attendant called Jane. If only we could share a cigarette.

“You know that a car is the safest place to be in a thunderstorm?” Kristy asks.

She’s now opposite me, close enough that she could rest her head against my chest, and listen to my heart. She doesn’t. Instead, she takes the towel and begins patting at my skin in circular motions, the rough nap of the fabric catching my stubble and from inside our curtained room I hear my wife’s recorded voice echo around the rest of the gallery.

Share this:

  • Share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook
  • Share on Threads (Opens in new window) Threads
  • Share on Bluesky (Opens in new window) Bluesky
  • Share on X (Opens in new window) X
  • Email a link to a friend (Opens in new window) Email
  • More
  • Share on LinkedIn (Opens in new window) LinkedIn
  • Share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit
  • Share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr
  • Share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest
  • Share on Telegram (Opens in new window) Telegram
  • Share on WhatsApp (Opens in new window) WhatsApp
  • Share on Mastodon (Opens in new window) Mastodon
  • Share on Nextdoor (Opens in new window) Nextdoor
  • Print (Opens in new window) Print
  • Share on X (Opens in new window) X

The Power of Imagery with Nina Schuyler

September 12 & 13 on Zoom
Enrollment closes Thursday, September 3 at 7:00 PM Pacific

If your descriptions are vivid but your stories still feel thin, this workshop is for you.

Join award-winning author Nina Schuyler to learn the difference between description, which tells a reader what things look like, and imagery, which carries plot, character, and meaning at the same time.

In just two days, you'll learn to choose images that hold emotion without naming it, pair them so each one deepens the other, and build patterns that gather meaning as the story moves.

Learn More and Enroll

Reader Interactions

Comments

  1. jmaples59Jean Maples says

    October 13, 2015 at 9:21 AM

    I enjoyed your story. Continue onward with your successes.

    Reply
  2. Jill Cox says

    October 13, 2015 at 9:40 AM

    Well done Keely, an enjoyable slightly haunting story.

    Reply
  3. Tiffany Fussell says

    October 13, 2015 at 9:42 AM

    Oooh, I like this! (And I use exclamation points sparingly.)

    Reply
  4. Delisa Moniz says

    October 13, 2015 at 10:51 AM

    This is good! I want more!

    Reply
  5. Gena says

    October 13, 2015 at 4:47 PM

    Great story, I enjoyed it. Hope to read more from you.

    Reply
  6. Mike says

    October 14, 2015 at 7:35 AM

    Awesome story, Keely! Makes me think of Hemingway’s iceberg principle – there’s so much lurking below the surface in this piece.

    Reply
  7. Kaz says

    October 14, 2015 at 10:41 AM

    Brilliantly descriptive, painting a clear picture in ones mind. Well done Miss O’shaughnessy.

    Reply
  8. sandy says

    October 14, 2015 at 5:38 PM

    I’m new to reading flash fiction, and stumbled on this story looking for something that would resonate. I don’t know why I like this, but it really struck me. I think I’m now hooked on this genre, thanks to this story. 🙂 Good work!

    Reply
  9. muskrateer13 says

    October 22, 2015 at 5:59 AM

    Really good story. It coaxed out a wry smile. Like the Updike references framing it too. Well done 🙂

    Reply

Leave a kind or constructive comment.Cancel reply

Primary Sidebar

Search Stories

Privacy Policy

Loading...

Insert/edit link

Enter the destination URL

Or link to existing content

    No search term specified. Showing recent items. Search or use up and down arrow keys to select an item.