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Migration

March 17, 2017 15 Comments

By Geecy Levins

We waited on the westernmost mesa, looking out past the guard rail down to a wide valley.

“For those who haven’t been to Yellowstone National Park,” continued our guide, a ranger—this was her third year at the migration after having come from Yellowstone. She kept bringing up Yellowstone—“first, you need to go. It’s a beautiful, amazing place. I was there once taking a picture and when I turned there’s a bison walking toward me, maybe twenty feet away, air blowing out of its nose into the cold air. I’ll never forget it.”

A girl child tugged at her mom, whispered up to her.

“My daughter has a question.”

“Yes.”

“What’s a bison?”

“Do you know what a buffalo is?”

“Sure.”

“Same thing, just different. See, they’re not really buffalo, they’re actually bison. Buffalo are totally different beasts in other lands. Okay?”

The girl nodded. Her eyes suggested that the answer warranted more words.

“Continuing, they have a geyser called Old Faithful. This geyser erupts about every 76 minutes, almost as if it’s on a manmade timer.”

A woman, half of a couple, raised a hand and didn’t wait to be called on, only for the guide to take a breath. “I’ve been there, too. I recommend going as well.”

“Yes, and for those who go, you really need to see the whole park.”

“What more is there?” the same woman asked.

Our guide stared at the woman for an uncomfortable amount of time. Finally, “There’s lots. Folks, my point about the geyser is that it is predictable. You can expect it. It’s that reliable.” She looked at her watch. “It’s a natural marvel, much like today. This southward migration happens every year. Now nobody say a word.”

She turned toward the valley and our group slid forward, many placing hands on the railing, some double and triple checking their cameras or waking up their phones.

“If you don’t breathe, you’ll feel them before you hear or see them.”

The vibrations started first on the rail. And then the earth trembled. Imagine silence suddenly giving way to oceans of water crashing onto the earth. Imagine the silence before the gulls, crabs, everything, screeching as if the world was ending. Imagine that first there’s nothing and then a distant noise charges toward you, engulfing everything in its wake.

“There,” the girl said and, with half of us, pointed. The first one became visible, immediately surrounded by ten, then fifty other RVs. Then more. They arrived, uncountable, all shapes and sizes, drawn on hitches behind trucks or complete in themselves, pulling small, standard cars, bikes riding piggyback, an occasional canoe. As they got nearer, we could make out bespectacled male drivers, female passengers, some with maps. There seemed to be no ending to the wave. Closer. We watched a female look up and see us. She looked to the driver and we were afraid there’d be panic. They both looked up and smiled. She waved. A quick moment and we waved back. “Snowbirds,” yelled the girl, just audible over the rumble. “They’re beautiful.”

Cameras clicked. A couple pointed at particular RVs while the man talked. “There’s a ‘56 Airstream. I’d bet it’s an original. You just don’t see that anymore.”

The girl waved like an awestruck child queen in her own parade. Here and there a passenger waved back. “I wished the Parkinson’s could’ve made it,” said one man to his wife. “Pictures won’t do. They just won’t do.”

The parade continued for hours. We had lunch, sandwiches, chips and soda or water, provided by the park service. The girl napped on her mom’s blanket.

“I saw that one on TV,” the man who knew his RVs said. He seemed in awe. He ate standing up, watching, not missing anything. “It’s got two full baths. And you can fit a car inside it. Imagine.”

After six hours, the width tapered like a lizard’s tail and, before the sun set, we could see the end of the main body. Beyond them were stragglers. “There always are,” the ranger explained, “for as many reasons as there are vehicles. Those who study the phenomenon say that some appear to just not be in a rush. Others are loners or sight seers, or maybe they came from Canada.”

We watched a solo RV a mile from the body. Its color was faded. It seemed to struggle to keep up.

“Will it make it?” the girl asked.

“Oh, it’ll be fine,” the ranger replied. “They all will. For another six weeks more’ll be trickling through.” She turned away from the lone RV, and like dutiful students, we moved to stand before her. “As many of you know, from here they’ll go to various parts of the southern United States, settling in for the winter, hiding from cold and snow in little sanctuaries that people have set up for them. Then, almost like they have an internal calendar that comes with an imperceptible warmth in the weather, they’ll make the long trip north to the homes they came from. Some to the exact spot where they were born. The migration north isn’t so dramatic, no one movement quite so massive.” She sighed, looked at the girl who had her hand raised. “Yes.”

“We have a place near where we live that they come to. Mom says I can’t go there.”

“Your mom’s a smart woman. It’s best to just watch them, maybe wave but not to get to close. We don’t want to scare them.”

“Oh.”

She turned back to the valley. “For now, though, it’s a wonderful thing to witness.”

The evening air chilled. We started to leave without the ranger. She lingered. We’d seen why in her eyes. She also wanted to make that trek south across our nation. Maybe one day. She’d have to make it past Yellowstone and shooting hot water and bison. But then, yes, she too could find her own warm spot in the sun.

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Comments

  1. Irene says

    March 17, 2017 at 4:37 AM

    Very cute-well done. We Canadians are more laid back, eh?

    Reply
  2. Kenny A Chaffin says

    March 17, 2017 at 5:20 AM

    Well Done!

    Reply
  3. David Henson says

    March 17, 2017 at 6:59 AM

    Fun…with a touch of melancholy at the end.

    Reply
  4. Roy Dorman says

    March 17, 2017 at 7:06 AM

    Nicely done, Geecy. The opening one third of the story, with its dialog showing the serious nature of the ranger, really made the RV migration seem like an actual event.

    Reply
  5. monkey-say-what says

    March 17, 2017 at 8:21 AM

    Fantastic – innovative and timely.

    Thanks for helping us see the migration in a different way.

    Reply
  6. Rianne Moss says

    March 17, 2017 at 8:27 AM

    I really enjoyed this story. The dialogue was realistic and as Roy said, it did make the RV migration feel like an actual event. Good Job!

    Reply
  7. Keith says

    March 17, 2017 at 8:55 AM

    And the girl asked, what makes the Snowbirds go South every year? The Ranger turned to her and smiled sadly, “They have this magnet in their brains that tells them they should.” “But why,” the girl pestered. “Because they think they’re Americans,” the Ranger replied, and the adults winced.
    Only Canadians can talk about the real aliens south of the border . . . eh.
    Nice ride, thanks for the vision!

    Reply
    • Geecy Levins says

      March 17, 2017 at 9:19 AM

      Yep, made me chuckle. Thanks.

      Reply
  8. Benita Wiggins says

    March 17, 2017 at 9:17 AM

    Wait . . . I thought this webpage was supposed to be for fiction! Ha, ha. It’s definitely not fiction when you are caught on Interstate 75 during the migration of RVs to and from Florida. We Floridians love our Snowbirds, all of them. You all come on down! From Benita in Saint Marks, Florida.

    Reply
  9. Dorothy Hinds says

    March 17, 2017 at 11:15 AM

    Loved it ! I could see the parade so clearly. Thank you.

    Reply
  10. Gena says

    March 17, 2017 at 3:49 PM

    Loved the story!

    Reply
  11. Mel Gambutti says

    March 17, 2017 at 6:50 PM

    I loved the twist from the Bison to feeling the rumble in the railing and the ground. My mind was on a herd, and then… Nicely done.

    Reply
  12. Geecy Levins says

    March 17, 2017 at 7:57 PM

    Thank you all for the comments. Very appreciated.

    Reply
  13. Paul Stansbury says

    March 18, 2017 at 6:37 AM

    Enjoyed this.

    Reply
  14. Firdaus Parvez says

    March 18, 2017 at 11:14 PM

    I have no clue what you’re talking about but I loved it. *googling*

    Reply

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