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Two Birds

May 9, 2017 15 Comments

By Kristy Lin Billuni

Two birds landed on the steel rail of a concrete terrace garden. “That empty pot might do nicely,” the cock said to the hen.

A big jade plant with plump, green and red leaves gave shade to a ceramic dish of water that sat on an overturned bucket. Beyond the garden, a glass wall reflected back at them. The birds hopped down to the dish to drink.

An orange pot crowned an iron plant-stand beside the bath. Shapely green and purple succulents curled out of the other pots on the stand, but whatever had once grown in the orange pot had died. A dry, golden branch hung down from it, dangling just above their heads.

The cock clipped at the branch, and it wafted to the concrete floor.

“It would not do nicely,” the hen said. “Besides, it’s too late. I need to go now.”

“Fine. Do it there.” He cocked his head to look up. The terrace fit into the side of an enormous concrete building, and the garden had a shiny, young fichus tree and a gypsophila, abundant with round, white buds. “This terrace is covered. And this garden is pleasant.”

“It’s too late.”

“Why do you keep saying that? We can do it here.”

“No, we can’t.”

The cock flapped up and settled, his claws dancing to balance on the fuchsia-colored spines of a cactus. “You could just lay it down right here in this orange pot.”

“Sure, I could, but I don’t think you understand,” the hen said. She dipped her beak for more water.

“What’s to understand? Put it down. Build it. Hatch it.”

“That’s what I’ve been trying to tell you. That’s not the right order. You have to build first, and it’s already too late.”

“I’m doing it now.” He caught a stem of gypsophila in his beak and with a jerk of his head, yanked at it.

“No. We’re here now. It’s decided.”

“Good,” he said. “What a relief.” He pushed his hard-won stem into the curve of the pot.

“You don’t understand. This will be the end of it.”

“What do you mean?”

“This is not a nice place for a nest. Because of that glass.”

They both watched their silhouettes and the garden’s dark shapes in the glass. The little fichus tree and the cactus and the rail all stood perfectly still, but something moved in the glass.

“She will take care of it. And that will be the end of it.”

“What are you talking about?”

“That’s why I brought us here. All the hens know about it.”

The cock lowered his head and puffed up his iridescent lavender breast. “Then we won’t do it here.”

“We must.”

“You brought us here on purpose. How could you?”

“I want to go to college.”

“So do I, but—”

“Then we have to do this.”

The cock flew away, out into the open sky, above the alley and between the crows’ nests, toward the highway. Then he swung around, flew past the crows again, their calls mocking him, and zipped down low through the alley, around the magnolia, and back up to the terrace.

“Why did you tell me?” the cock asked the hen.

“Doves mate for life.”

“What does that have to do with it?”

She swayed a little on the rail. “I have to do this now.”

“No, don’t. I don’t want you to.”

“It’s too late for that.”

She hopped down onto the dry dirt in the orange pot. She felt so heavy and fat, she just wanted this thing out of her. She closed her eyes and relaxed. It burned, like sunshine in your eyes but in her cloaca. It stung, and then it hurt more, and then it was a relief, a great relief. And the egg was out of her. She launched into the air and flew in a tall loop, the cock screeching at her from the terrace far below. She landed on the steel railing and shook her feathers.

“We can’t leave it here,” the cock said, flapping in a panic above the orange pot.

“It’s too late,” said the hen. “It’s laid.”

“I’ll stay here and protect it.”

“She’s bigger than you.”

“I’ll build a nest around it, keep it warm, hatch it.”

“You’ll only get your heart broken. Let’s go. There will be other eggs. I promise.” She hopped down from the railing, joining him on the edge of the orange pot. She snuggled him.

The two birds flew over the alley, out toward the billboard that flashed over the highway. A woman stepped out into the garden and put both hands on her hips with a shrug.

“Those pigeons,” she said and got her trowel.

The sun shined hard, so that everything was pale, and she could almost see all the way across the bay to Oakland. She dug a hole in the dry soil of a dead plant and rolled the little egg into the hole. She crushed it and covered it with dirt. Then she wiped the trowel’s blade and went back inside.

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Comments

  1. Keith says

    May 9, 2017 at 8:42 AM

    It felt like a fairy tale and then half way through shifted focus. So I had to readjust my perception of the story. I kept trying to glean meaning from gypsophila since it was mentioned twice. So I was left a bit confused. However, the sunshine burning in the eyes but in her cloaca, now that rocked! In the end I felt sad that the woman crushed the egg. Then again, it is what happens when you live in Oakland.

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  2. Wolf says

    May 9, 2017 at 10:45 AM

    Liked it more if the lady tried to save the baby Bird rather than kill it, but they are only city pigeons after all, at least they live to try again, great job

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  3. Dorothy Hinds says

    May 9, 2017 at 12:06 PM

    Oooohhhh ! I don’t know how to feel now. So irresponsible of those two.

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  4. Kat says

    May 9, 2017 at 5:20 PM

    As someone who performs pigeon “abortions” regularly (ours go in the compost), I appreciate the back story. I always think: they must all know that this is not a good place by now. I prefer this explanation to my assumption that they are just tenacious and/or clueless.

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  5. Kristy Lin Billuni, The Sexy Grammarian says

    May 10, 2017 at 7:47 AM

    Thanks so much for reading, Keith, Wolf, Dorothy, and especially Kat, for your spot-on validation of my intention and inspiration for this story.

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  6. Sheila says

    May 10, 2017 at 8:54 AM

    Beautifully sad, Kristy!

    Reply
  7. dbilluni says

    May 11, 2017 at 10:13 AM

    I enjoyed your pigeon story as such a perfect example of the Fable as Allegory, and somehow the pigeons bring a touch of whimsy to a tale with a sober and meaningful moral.

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    • monkey-say-what says

      May 11, 2017 at 11:23 AM

      Seconded! Great job, Kristy.

      Reply
  8. Kristy Lin Billuni, The Sexy Grammarian says

    May 12, 2017 at 8:04 AM

    Kind words from Dad, Sheila, and monkey. Thanks, friends! I hope to publish more pigeon stories soon.

    Reply
  9. Bernard Arias says

    May 14, 2017 at 10:41 AM

    This is the story from a pigeon’s perspective that’s never been told. Only as a child had I met a pigeon I liked until now. Pigeons don’t appear to have any characteristics that make them lovable like dogs. But pigeons like dogs share the human connection. They thrive where we thrive. But unlike dogs the connection is usually unwanted. I think the pigeon story is due to be told. Go Kristy!

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  10. Amy Firman says

    May 15, 2017 at 10:26 AM

    “I want to go to college.” Perfection! Love this, Kristy!

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  11. Lora Silver says

    May 15, 2017 at 10:27 AM

    I was drawn in and enjoying where the story took me and my imagination the whole time. Thank you for writing and sharing!

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  12. Kristy Lin Billuni, The Sexy Grammarian says

    May 17, 2017 at 12:00 PM

    Bernard, Amy, Lora, I am BEYOND thrilled that you read my story and enjoyed it. Your comments fill my little pigeon heart with love!

    Reply
  13. Juhi Kalra says

    March 22, 2018 at 8:25 PM

    I am chancing upon your writing, and this has shaken me somewhat. Sigh.

    Reply
  14. Cheryl Resser-Ruse says

    May 11, 2019 at 12:49 PM

    Pigeon’s need to plan ahead, I’m sad for the egg.

    Reply

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