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A Life through Trees

January 24, 2020 16 Comments

By T.Y. Euliano

The year he bought the tree-covered land, he showed it to her daddy and he consented to the marriage. The preacher married them in the prettiest clump of trees, under the one that bore the heart and their initials.

By their first anniversary, a quarter-acre lay cleared, the white pines now a two-room house constructed by dozens of helpful hands. He chopped down a tree from the special clump for their bed and built it himself, one nail at a time.

A year later, another quarter-acre became a kitchen. He chopped down another small tree from the special clump for the crib and built it himself.

After five years, more trees became a loft for his sons, and a bedroom with a door, and a washroom.

From the shrinking special clump, he chopped down a tree for the desk she used to teach reading and writing, and a sapling for the switch he used to teach everything else.

Five more years and at last, she delivered the daughter she’d prayed for, but it wasn’t to be. Worse, even. He went again to the special clump and surveyed the once-beautiful land by the light of the once-glorious moon. He chopped and chopped, but the tree fought back. He fought harder, with a rage he’d never known. He built it himself, until a second hammer joined in, and then a third. He and his sons built a single box for mother and daughter, together.

Amongst the ragged stumps, the preacher prayed over the casket that bore the heart and their initials. The rain began to fall, mixing with tears, as he looked over the splintered field until a small hand led him to a sapling struggling upward from amongst the trunks. In the midst of mourning, hope. In the midst of despair, life.

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  1. Sue says

    January 24, 2020 at 1:37 AM

    What a sad little tale.

    Reply
  2. Jorge Liv says

    January 24, 2020 at 8:46 AM

    Wow, great story, nicely told.

    Reply
  3. Judy Penz Sheluk says

    January 24, 2020 at 9:39 AM

    Beautiful and powerful. Well done.

    Reply
  4. Betsy says

    January 24, 2020 at 10:59 AM

    Beautiful and sad….life

    Reply
  5. Laura Lynch says

    January 24, 2020 at 11:20 AM

    Tender and moving. Spare with words but rich with impact.

    Reply
  6. Marianne says

    January 24, 2020 at 1:18 PM

    Such a beautiful and heartfelt story. Thank you.

    Reply
  7. Kaye George says

    January 24, 2020 at 1:40 PM

    Beautiful.

    Reply
  8. Kelly Sandt says

    January 24, 2020 at 3:10 PM

    Real, raw, powerful.

    Reply
  9. Susan P. Blevins says

    January 24, 2020 at 5:39 PM

    This beautiful and sad tale brought tears to my eyes. I could see the trees and everything that the trees witnessed. Thank you for writing so tenderly.
    Susan

    Reply
  10. Sue Vargas says

    January 24, 2020 at 8:43 PM

    Your words told a beautiful story !

    Reply
  11. William Hubbard says

    January 25, 2020 at 12:13 AM

    Wonderful. Thank you.

    Reply
  12. Archie Iyer says

    January 25, 2020 at 6:33 AM

    Poignant..
    Conveyed so much in a few words..

    Reply
  13. Jerry Yachabach says

    January 25, 2020 at 9:15 AM

    Great story. Words quickly became pictures of happiness. I can’t help but think that you have devoted your medical life trying to change the last two paragraphs for a happy ending.

    Reply
  14. Cynthia says

    January 27, 2020 at 9:46 AM

    Beautifully told, Tammy. Sad…like “The GivingTree”, one of my favorite books.. Thank you for sharing.

    Reply
  15. Vivian says

    January 29, 2020 at 10:01 AM

    Wow…

    Reply
  16. Nursa says

    February 9, 2020 at 8:11 AM

    What is the theme of this story?

    Reply

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