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In Some Parallel Universe

November 1, 2020 16 Comments

By Sonal Kohli

You are a tattoo-armed hair stylist, all bangs, purple hair. A suede belt at the waist for combs and clips. You smile at the client in the mirror as you pump the chair to the right height, you look them in the eye and straighten their head. You run your fingers through the wet hair, you pick up the shears. You love the crispy sound the hair makes between the blades. You relish it falling to the floor like autumn leaves.

A haircut is more than just grooming, a tidying up. You see it as a cleansing, a chance at new beginnings. As you work the shears, you sense who this person is, who they want to be, and shape them accordingly.

When you sweep the cut strands from the floor, it is like gathering an old persona, a shed body; to give it dignity, you whisper a prayer over it.

You were five when you stole into the storeroom with the craft scissors. Snip, snip, snip. It was mesmerizing to watch something attached to you fall off so effortlessly. You loved the freshness of the cut edges. You crept out of the storeroom and returned the scissors to their place. Of course, mom noticed your uneven hair, the dark locks you had left behind on the storeroom floor, and she and dad gave you a grand scolding.

Mistakes, unsound judgements, bad haircuts were unredeemable. For you, life was toeing a tightrope. You didn’t dare take the scissors to your hair again.

You are not a tattoo-armed stylist. You are a dowdy writer working at your laptop in the half-light of the basement. Your daughter, however, is cherubic, her dark hair glossy, soft as the finest silk.

Six months into the pandemic, her first haircut, long overdue.

A Sunday after her bath, you sit her in one of her little chairs, your basement desk doubles as a stylist’s station as you drape a striped towel around her, and take the scissors. The crisp sound of slicing an apple.

In the mirror, tattoos emerge on your arms and your hair turns purple at the ends.

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Comments

  1. Susan F. Reid says

    November 1, 2020 at 7:34 AM

    Great images of a stylist in action. It made me realize descriptions I left out in a story I wrote about a stylist.

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 1, 2020 at 12:13 PM

      Thank you so much for reading!

      Reply
  2. Keith says

    November 1, 2020 at 7:43 AM

    Sonal, some folks just never get out of the scissors and paste phase in their education… just kidding. Take a moment to sit in the sun. Even if that means pulling an old sofa on the roof. Your follicles will thank you.
    Nice moments in your story, particularly the love for the daughter. Hair-cutting is another way to make love, no doubt. We learned it from our predecessor species.

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 1, 2020 at 12:12 PM

      Thank you for your comments!

      Reply
  3. Ephra Behn says

    November 1, 2020 at 8:44 AM

    Very nice!
    And who among us hasn’t cut our own hair? Hey, I even “dyed” mine with lipstick! I was, like, six.
    For that shuddering memory alone I thank you for this story.

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 1, 2020 at 12:11 PM

      Thank you, Ephra, for reading my story!

      Reply
  4. Nic B says

    November 1, 2020 at 1:28 PM

    Love it. Tattoos, eh? But… dowdy!! No way. Never. x

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 2, 2020 at 6:49 AM

      Nic! Thank you for reading!x

      Reply
  5. Sue Clayton says

    November 1, 2020 at 8:09 PM

    I so much enjoyed this story with its great ending twist. Well done, Sinal.

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 2, 2020 at 6:48 AM

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  6. Helen Kreeger says

    November 2, 2020 at 1:50 AM

    The title tips off the reader. Otherwise, great story, well written.

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 2, 2020 at 6:47 AM

      Thank you for your perspective!

      Reply
  7. Thomas Fitzgerald McCarthy says

    November 2, 2020 at 11:16 AM

    Fascinating story, Sonal. I like the transference back to reality at the end, and how you tie into COVID. Great metaphor for how the isolation caused by the pandemic has our brains reaching out of our skulls in various manners and causing fantastical daydreams. Very well executed.

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 2, 2020 at 1:24 PM

      Thank you so much, Thomas, for your kind comment!

      Reply
  8. Leena says

    November 21, 2020 at 1:24 AM

    I really enjoyed reading this. The way you evoke images is so powerful. I felt like I was there with her.

    Reply
    • Sonal Kohli says

      November 21, 2020 at 9:08 AM

      Thank you, Leena, for taking the time to read!

      Reply

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