By Jeremy Nathan Marks
Chanukah typically falls in December, the same month as Christmas. I love looking at tiny lights during a dark season, so I decorate our front window with a small electric menorah. But my taste in illumination, the glimmer I seek at this time of year, is overshadowed by the display across the street.
For years, our neighbors piled lights on top of lights and displayed them from Halloween until the New Year. We gaped at the amplitude of their display and invested in thick black drapes. Every December, they hired an electrician to find them more power. The birds, dazed by the departure of darkness, did not sleep, and bounced off cars.
Red and blue, charcoal, and gray avians lay on the asphalt. The feathers of rufous raptors and the piebald breasts of little woodpeckers (even turkey tails) lay in the road, creating a mosaic more colorful than the fluorescents our neighbors prized.
I tried talking to them about the carnage. I told the wife I found a snowy owl in the street. “You’re a vegetarian; surely, you notice the dead piling up every morning?”
“No,” she said.
“I can show you right now.” Within minutes, I’d filled six boxes and brought them up to the porch.
When I came home from work that evening, I was met by a policeman who told me I was to stop making threatening gestures against my neighbor. I said that I had not and explained what I had done; I spoke of the birds and the all-night lights; and the fact that no one was getting any darkness. He told me I should be thankful for so much brightness at this time of year and not trespass on her property again.
One night later, there was a blackout on our street. The night was mercifully dark.
I knew my neighbors were to blame for the outage; they had overloaded the grid, at last, sending a shock wave across town.
It is rare, even in winter, for the night to be black. I went for a walk, needing to revel in the surprise gift of actual darkness. I walked for miles across a blind city. No Don’t Walk signs obstructed my stroll; no streetlights revealed my face. Even the hospitals were in the dark. I didn’t find anyone with a working flashlight.
When I returned home, my neighbors were standing in their front yard telling my wife that the blackout was my fault.
When they saw me, they started shouting that I had cut the power. My wife said, what’s your proof? And they pointed to the menorah in our front window, its tiny lights a pariah in the darkness. Our menorah is lit by candles, she told them.
“That’s not the point,” the woman’s husband said. And his wife turned to him and screeched, “I’ve been saying for years that we have to get off this street!” Before asking me, “What gives you the right to make us stare at your strange lights?”
But before I could reply, an owl landed in her hair. It stood perfectly still, my menorah glowing in its eyes.
Divine retribution – love it!
Hi Lois,
Absolutely. 🙂
Very best wishes,
Jeremy
YESSS!!
Hi Susan,
I’m glad you enjoyed the story. 🙂
Thank you for reading,
Jeremy
What a fitting final sentence. And thanks for speaking up for the underdog, darkness, that has lived so long in the shadow of light. It makes me long for the sky deep in the woods or across the stretches of Utah or other such expanse.
Hi Ron,
I am so glad you enjoyed the story.
I agree with you that darkness is “the underdog.” That is such a perfect way to put it.
I used to live in Colorado, and I miss the darkness and expanse of the high plains where the only light was the moon and the stars.
Thank you very much for reading my work,
Jeremy
Can’t begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. Wonderful.
Hi Sue,
Thank you so much for telling me that. 🙂
I appreciate that you took the time to read my story.
Jeremy
Wow. What a story. You succeeded in creating such a vivid scene I could actually see it. The ending blew me away. Unique and powerful storytelling. Congratulations!
Hi Susan,
Thank you for your kind words, and for reading my story. :😊
Very best wishes,
Jeremy
Absolutely lovely!
Thank you very much! 😊
Jeremy
Wonderful story. Its particularly appropriate since Chanukah represents the triumph of light over darkness.
Was there a specific reason you used an owl as the animal that landed in her hair.
Thank you for this wonderful story.
Hi Robert,
Thank you for your very kind words.
I love your question.
I was thinking of Minerva’s Owl as it represents change, the movement from one era to another. I was also thinking of the owl as a symbol of wisdom and therefore illumination. I think this connects to Chanukah in exactly the way you said. 😊
Thank you very much for reading my story.
Very best wishes,
Jeremy
Freaky story, this one. So was the menorah lit with candles? Or was it electric? Was the narrator controlling birds with the “strange lights” of the menorah?
Hi Mel,
The menorah was lit with candles. As to whether the narrator controlled the birds, I leave that to you to decide.
Thank you for reading,
Jeremy