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The Elephant and the String

March 23, 2025 9 Comments

By Frederick O'Brien

In a forest, there was an elephant tied to a tree by a string. Although the elephant was big and the string was thin, the elephant stayed where it was.

Sometimes, other animals walked by the elephant and found it beautiful. 

“Come with us,” they would say. 

“I cannot,” the elephant would reply. “There is a string.”

Despite the entreaties of these animals, the elephant insisted it could not move. So they’d continue on their way, puzzled and sad.

Every day, the elephant examined the string intently. It became familiar with its sinew, its rough yet worn texture, and its colors. The string inspired much curiosity, even admiration. The elephant found it beautiful in its way. 

Occasionally, the elephant cast its eyes upwards at the sky and the trees and the horizon and perceived them to be yet more beautiful than the string. In these moments, the elephant thought about what its life might be like if the string was not there, but these thoughts frightened the elephant, and it soon returned its attention to the string. 

One day, another elephant appeared.

“Come with me,” it said. 

“I cannot. There is a string.”

“You can. There is you. The string is small, and you are large. Walk away and it will break.”

The elephant shook its head. “When I pull against it, the string gets stronger. I can feel it.”

“That will pass. Pull and it will break. Please. Please try.”

“It is impossible.”

“You are stronger than the string.”

“No!”

The elephant was suddenly furious with this meddler. It hated it and told it so and asked it to leave. As the second elephant walked away, the first one saw the tattered remnants of a string around one of its hind ankles and wept.

As seasons passed, the elephant’s strength faded. Its mighty and graceful form became feeble. Each day, it grew more frightened, more resigned.

The elephant grew to hate the string, and itself for being snared by it, yet also nurtured for it a love. It was familiar, and yet, an endless mystery. That such a slender thing could restrain so large a creature seemed incredible.

“Come with us.”

“I cannot. There is a string.”

“Come with us.”

“I cannot. There is a string.”

So went the days with the elephant and the string. The elephant gazed at the string and wept, and when it became sick, it did not care.

Now, when the elephant looked at the sky and the trees and the horizon, it was glad, for it knew it would soon be free of their torment. It closed its eyes and cleared its mind, and waited. 

When the elephant died, it tipped on its side, and the string snapped.

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Comments

  1. Patricia Pease says

    March 23, 2025 at 1:24 PM

    What a great expression of how we sometimes chain ourselves to things that don’t serve us, but we have the ability to leave. Our minds hold so much power. Fantastic metaphor!

    Reply
  2. Tom says

    March 23, 2025 at 8:07 PM

    I echo the above sentiment. Loved this story.

    Reply
  3. rgcviper says

    March 24, 2025 at 10:22 PM

    Wow. This one hit me right in the feels. Great story development and journey, though I’m sad for the elephant. Awesome.

    Reply
  4. Litsa Dremousis says

    March 25, 2025 at 3:14 AM

    Genuinely love this. All of it.

    Reply
  5. Dana says

    March 26, 2025 at 7:13 AM

    Brilliant

    Reply
  6. Rosemarie McGourty says

    March 26, 2025 at 8:27 AM

    Hits on so many levels…beautiful!

    Reply
  7. Molly says

    March 26, 2025 at 8:30 AM

    Wonderful use of the fable form to send a message we all need to hear. Thank you.

    Reply
  8. Al Airone says

    March 26, 2025 at 9:56 AM

    A great parable, and an image that applies to so many things: letting an obstacle rule your life, fear of change, unwillingness to trust (the advice of others). A great read,

    Reply
  9. Diana says

    March 26, 2025 at 3:37 PM

    A brilliant fable. Accessible text on the surface and deeply meaningful subtext.

    Reply

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